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one day my heart just opened up
and a whole world leaped out
everything i needed to say
found it's word, found it's voice

every image there was inside me
that would never take a shape
found it's colour found it's beauty
became a radiance in a night

one day my eyes opened up
and seeing was rebirth
every thing had meaning
and value and life
every one had a purpose
and a place and a time

once i had passion
and my passions burned
once i had feeling
once i had life

one day i dreamed this
before i fell asleep
one day i'll achieve this
one day i'll have peace
©2006-2009 ~da-wite
:iconda-wite:

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:icongoldflower:
cool! I like the tone!
:iconlost-inside-myhead:
great! i especially loveyour tone and expression in the first stanza, powerfull and emotive language usage there :clap:

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I tried sniffing coke once, but the ice
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thx ^_^
i feel all special

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u should! :hug:

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I tried sniffing coke once, but the ice
cubes stuck in my nose
:crazy:
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(\_/) copy the bunny
(0.o) into your sign
'(__)'help him achieve world domination!!
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